reverie Posted August 17, 2002 Report Posted August 17, 2002 I-do (theme of D.R.N... revised 17Aug02) I can’t write for fear of fright I can’t fear if I let you near And I won’t win if I let you in So, I won’t even try… Call me a loser, call me a fool Call me anything, so I can be kewl Grant me an audious, lend me an ear It’s not that your special, it’s just that your near… -But you know me, so well I can’t hide, my soft-thin shell… ‘Cause I don’t love you anymore But I do …Not understand you Sometimes I feel, I should die… Sometimes I think, why even try ‘Cause I don’t love you anymore But I do …Not understand you Look back in the mirror, then turn away It’s only an image of you, anyway Why must it matter, what they hear you say… Today… ‘Cause I don’t love you anymore But I do …Not understand you revery the dreamlost "burrrrrr" the dream continues... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?
Guest opesopacus Posted August 18, 2002 Report Posted August 18, 2002 i like the "Cause I don’t love you anymore But I do …Not understand you" nice "play" with words... conveys message of mixed emotions
reverie Posted August 18, 2002 Author Report Posted August 18, 2002 thanx... the whole poem grew out of that phrase(though alittle altered)... kept it in my head for year and half before i finally wrote it down in nyyrak's draftroom... pub57.ezboard.com/fthedraftroomfrm3 rev... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?
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