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Leading a new time in the line

A different experience to me

Poetry flows from my lips

Giving birth to life expanding

I whirl in black nothingness

A part of me I treasure not

But even more I hold so dear

An imperfect angel in black

 

I dye my soul in shades of light

Purely fictional feelings of blight

An imperfect angel, that's what I am

An angel bereft or wings or a tan

 

Neophyte, a martyr of sound

Twirling and whirling, death comes

Soundless drums carry my head

And echos of shadows hate indeed

I spin without wings, trust in fate

Die lonely, but confident

My ability far exceeds myself

And I know so very little

 

Music is life, without it I'd burn

Alone in a soul-less, hopeless world

A word is a magic, no matter the cost

But the price was my sanity, have I lost?

 

A bad moon rising, covered

Hatred filling up the space between

An imperfect angel rides on a star

Flinging deadly dust to lively sites

Hair of raven with eyes of thunder

Bereft of wings or angelic raiments

I stand alone with my golden lies

Spread the word of the Fallen One!

 

An Imperfect Angel, that's all I am

Nothing more, nothing less to most

I sleep within the worked mind of God

And die deep within satan's fist

Guest XelnagaTheFirst
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I really enjoyed this work, thank you for sharing it with us .

 

I liked the martr of sound part it really caught my eye and my mental awarness .

 

very good

 

Xelnaga

 

"You are such an inspiration for the ways that i will never ever choose to be, oh so many ways for me to show you how your saint has abandoned you"

 

Edited by: XelnagaTheFirst at: 7/21/02 9:40:53 pm

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Wow, this is quite simply one of the best poems I've heard/read in a long time, period. Excellent work, my friend!

BigPointyStick

 

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Indeed. Very good.

~Zool~

 

Ancient, The Pen is Mightier than the Sword.

Bard of Terra, Patron Saint of Aspiring Bards.

 

Master of Magic and Mayhem, The Moonlit Realm

 

Elder than dirt, more foolish than a jester, able to trip over the smallest logic in a single step. It's... Oh, you know.

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