Nyyark Posted July 20, 2002 Report Posted July 20, 2002 Simply another lost passing, By he who walks without touching A king without a world A specter of grief Just a Glance and a Flash of Teeth Components and structures no longer matter All is clear for him to see And they all twist around him All giving their plea But all they get Is a Glance and a flash of teeth The smile is a true as can be Watching the currents shift before him The world moves with his eyes Seeing what's going to be as what has been All in a glance and Flash of teeth He is an untouchable dream He is a bird in the sky With the wind in his wings And all you'll ever get Is a glance and a flash of Teeth Edited by: Nyyark at: 7/25/02 6:18:47 am
The Portrait of Zool Posted July 21, 2002 Report Posted July 21, 2002 I think this is your best of your most recent. A bit inscrutable, but that helps to make it more of what the reader wants.
Rahsash Geldich Posted July 24, 2002 Report Posted July 24, 2002 I agree with Zool, but I get a few different images. There's the egomaniac who is better than everyone, the loner, and the traditional heroic person. The free style (free meaning interesting or flowing, not the usual idea of free style) makes it an interesting piece, neat read.
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