Rahsash Geldich Posted July 20, 2002 Report Posted July 20, 2002 Its raining. And there's lightning. But its so beautiful and dark. You've ignored me, left me, And now you wonder what's wrong. Too late, I'm gone, you can't get me back. And I don't want to come. I've learned independence, at a cost. The cost was my trust in you. And now you can't fit into my life Nor can you heal the scars. And your tries just leave me worse And the shockwaves shatter My friends as well as I. I'm not enough. But what you can pretend, you can soothe Maybe to you, but I can't lie anymore. I'm tired. From lack of sleep and lack of care. The alcohol was in your eyes tonight. They looked at me and they were blank. Glassy. Blind. And I wanted to scream. 'Cause beer or no, The effect of my words is the same. And I'm lost. Alone. Unsure, overjudged. Can I even try before you cut me down? Let me shoot up a red flag... O wait, you ignored it. Are not sure, so you pretend again. Flare... The Titanic is sinking again. She's taking on water, the icy black. Black depression sweeps in the holes.
Nyyark Posted July 20, 2002 Report Posted July 20, 2002 Nice Job, you have knack for perfect metaphores.
The Portrait of Zool Posted July 20, 2002 Report Posted July 20, 2002 Is the only alternative to being coddled being depressed? Great theme. Very universal, very timeless. Take the lesson and run.
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