HopperWolf Posted July 10, 2002 Report Posted July 10, 2002 See you lying there, Now childish features full of innocence, See you lying there, In the subtle state of your world of dreams, See you lying there, A world of trouble left behind in peace, See you lying there, A face I’d lay down for if showing pain. Soft skin with gentle cheeks, Hair swept across your face, And eyes closed tight. Curled frame I’d hold you tight, Head to chest to protect you, As best I can. See you lying there, Wrapped warm in comfort’s blanket, See you lying there, Wrapped safe in love’s covers, See you lying there, Angelic face that when I See you lying there, You steal my willing devotion. Beautiful one, Soft and tender to the touch, Beautiful one, Warm under my lips, Beautiful one, I give you my all, As you lie in your sleep, Never to know, The promise I make, Never to know, That I keep it every moment, But never to break it.
Nyyark Posted July 10, 2002 Report Posted July 10, 2002 You never fail to amaze me with your love poems. Congrats on another successful attempt at capturing something most have a hard time defining. Nyyark smiles Good Job!
Guest Xradion Posted July 12, 2002 Report Posted July 12, 2002 Nice job! Actually, I think that this poem could describe the filial love between a parent and their child just as well as it could apply to a very innocent sort of "pure love" relationship. The initial image I got was of a father or mother watching over their child, peacefully resting in a land of blissful sleep. Xradion, The Horny Druid, Scholar of the Ancient Arts, Holder of the Eye of Odin. "The only emperor is the emperor of ice-cream." -Wallace Stevens "When at home, do as the Homans do." –Xradion
reverie Posted July 12, 2002 Report Posted July 12, 2002 love is grand, enjoy... good for you.... revery the dreamlost "argh, must need get sleep!" the dream continues... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?
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