Guest Tyrunn Alberyn Posted July 1, 2002 Report Posted July 1, 2002 I was in debt, but debts were due, and so, I paid. I was in love, but love was pain, and so, I changed. I was in pain, but pain was hell, and so, I fought. I was alive, but life was wild, and so, I'm caged. --- At least I'm not ill anymore... however with no more home connection and work connection I only can get online through library comps. Blah.
Nyyark Posted July 1, 2002 Report Posted July 1, 2002 This is neat. I like the way it brings across its message, for thats a trial I've suffered. I look forward to seeing more of you here.
reverie Posted July 2, 2002 Report Posted July 2, 2002 hmm, reminds me of a spoken word poem... kewl... Hey, ty... come around more often or when ever you can Just one thing though... um your last stanza kind of throws me... With life being 'wild' and all... how does that cage you? maybe you refering back you your previous stanza's of life trails n'stuff... oh well, just wondering... oh wait a minute... It hard to put into words but, i think i get it now... um, maybe... Something to do with since life problems was so wild that you were forced to make changes in reaction to them that ended up making you feel 'caged' or even withdrawn from the harshness life... Well, that just occured to me, so i could be way off... But, then again all poems by nature are open interpertion, so you just might choose to keep it a secret, so people will wonder, and wonder, and maybe write and base whole stories or films off it, so it ends up being taught in great schools, where proffersor exclaim the true hidden meaning of it all to their confused pupils, while you just set back and silently chuckle at the lovely storm of emotional identification and connectiveness you've created... revery the dreamlost "yea!" the dream continues... note: i just had my first taste of caffiened i like a whole month, can you tell??? sorry... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?Edited by: reverie at: 7/2/02 6:26:00 pm
Guest Tyrunn Alberyn Posted July 8, 2002 Report Posted July 8, 2002 Actually... if you really want to know, because my life was so wild and because I had so many problems, I started neglecting myself, upon which some concerned friends called my parents, who interfered, in a way that for my feelings simply left me caged. Clear now? Hehe, as for me dropping by, I drop by as often as is possible for me, which unfortunately, is not often. Perhaps when I'm not caged anymore I'll once more have all the time I want (Edited for a bad spelling mistake... anyone know where the n goes in simply? ) Edited by: Tyrunn Alberyn at: 7/8/02 5:11:24 am
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