Falcon2001 Posted July 1, 2002 Report Posted July 1, 2002 Hmm, I haven't written in a long time, oh well. Here we go! Your smile is a glacier cracking in two Your heart could destroy the kindest view You've beauty, 'tis true, but the cruelest sort I hate you, despair, and withdraw my support. You've got something for everyone But nothing for me I've seen all the lies and truth And all there is to see Despair's a girl with wicked eyes A fetching smile that can criticize A perfect body with perfect curves With so much more than she deserves She's got something for everyone But nothing for me I've seen all the lies and truth And all there is to see She'll draw you in and hold you close And hurt you where you feel it most She'll take your soul and throw it away And then she'll with your ruined body play She's an evil mistress with a hidden plan Like a secret spy from a distant clan She'll hide her face until the end And then she'll reveal she's not a friend She's a banshee, a demon, a fiend Like the darkness before light intervened Nothing she'll say should sway your path If nothing else, should ignite your wrath She's got something for everyone But nothing for all We've seen all the lies and truth And we've seen how to fall Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta
Guest Xradion Posted July 1, 2002 Report Posted July 1, 2002 I like it a lot. Sort of has the feel of a short ballad to me for some reason. The insight you provide in the matter of despair is very sage. Good to hear from you again! Speaking of which, I haven't posted a poem in a while either... Xradion, The Horny Druid, Scholar of the Ancient Arts, Holder of the Eye of Odin. "The only emperor is the emperor of ice-cream." -Wallace Stevens "When at home, do as the Homans do." –Xradion
Nyyark Posted July 1, 2002 Report Posted July 1, 2002 Wow, This flows really well, and lyrics are meanful! I liked it alot, don't stop posting.
Gyrfalcon Posted July 3, 2002 Report Posted July 3, 2002 *Gyrfalcon applauds* I like this poem a lot Falcon- it resonates well. (I can't explain it any better. *grins*)
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