reverie Posted June 28, 2002 Report Posted June 28, 2002 *oh this is meant to be a song... so it prolly won't translate as while in stand-alone lyric form... oh well here goes* You don’t know me, Yeah you don’t know me. But you might as well There’s something in the way you… You don’t know me, Yeah you don’t know me Well you might as well There’s something in the way you… -But you don’t want to see my fear tonight -And you don’t want to see all the pain I fight… Yeah- you don’t know me And you won’t know me ‘til I give you the chance… There’s something in the way you… You don’t know me, Yeah, you don’t know me… ‘cause I let the words die on my lips Another unsung melody… -So help me remember, then let me forget -Why life seems in slumber, the further you get? ‘Cause you don’t know me, Yeah you don’t know me But you might as well There was just something in way you smiled. revery the dreamlost... Edited by: reverie at: 6/28/02 6:50:24 pm
Nyyark Posted June 29, 2002 Report Posted June 29, 2002 Cool. This definatly could make a song. I wish I could here the music. do you write music to go along with you songs? Anyway... Good Job!
reverie Posted June 29, 2002 Author Report Posted June 29, 2002 thanx... um, saddly i don't write music... I played sax for a few years and learned to read it... And i still remember some of of the theroy behind writing music... but, i really haven't the skill to sent any of it down... Enventually, i think i'm going to have to do like the singer 'seal' did... He bought a tape recorder and sung all the parts to his songs piece by piece into it... Then had someone transpose it all, till he learned how to do it himself... In my case, i could prolly ask my older brother to do it, well if he ever finds the time... but that's thoughts for other days... Um, just to point out something... That 'holes' a.k.a 'patch up' poem i posted up in the library is also meant to be a song... revery the dreamlost...
Guest Xradion Posted July 1, 2002 Report Posted July 1, 2002 Cool! I think it would make a good song. I also think up a lot of melodies/harmony parts for them, but almost never get around to writing them out as it takes me far too long. I think I will take a hint from you and start recording them from now on so that I don't forget the ones I like. Thanks for the tip. Xradion, The Horny Druid, Scholar of the Ancient Arts, Holder of the Eye of Odin. "The only emperor is the emperor of ice-cream." -Wallace Stevens "When at home, do as the Homans do." –Xradion
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