Guest Fire Walker Posted June 18, 2002 Report Posted June 18, 2002 (Conversion confusion, this is actually the second post in the thread.) I'm speechless. It was a really good poem, and now I have no idea of what to say. I really am speechless. Wait, by saying that I'm speechless and rambling on.... Ignore me.
Gyrfalcon Posted June 18, 2002 Report Posted June 18, 2002 (Conversion confusion, this is actually the third post in the thread.) *Gyrfalcon applauds* Excellent work, my friend.
The Big Pointy One Posted June 18, 2002 Report Posted June 18, 2002 ~ Why is it every time I lay my heart on the line? Why is it every day I find another way To let myself down? To let myself drown- In you. It's true. I can't help myself My heart I can not shelf When you don't have much You act much Like me. Please see My eyes Stained from my cries As I die Late at night, An internal fight For you. It's true. I'm sorry, I just can't help but falling in love. ~ I'm working on this whole 'poetry' thing, trying to improve and what-not. In most cases though, I don't try to adhere to certain styles, although in this case I stayed with a AA BB, etc, rhyme scheme, except for that one triplet near the end, obviously. I think this may work better as a song rather than a straight-up poem. I don't know... well, if anyone comments, give me their opinion, it's *always* appreciated ^.^ BigPointyStick ----------------- Wielder of the BPS Companion of Mr.Bunny "I can throw knives!"
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