reverie Posted June 17, 2002 Report Posted June 17, 2002 Not sure how to write one of these ode type things... but oh well here goes... Always supportive or ever so kind Readily hugs, to sooth out a bind... A sweet little vixen, both friend and a muse Figured i'd write this, have nothing to lose... See her off casting... Her Wishes so far This one seems lasting, No satelite stars... okay... that was fun revery the dreamlost Edited by: reverie at: 6/17/02 5:25:37 pm
reverie Posted June 17, 2002 Author Report Posted June 17, 2002 oh wow. In looking over this i just had an an an a-p-i-f-f-a-n-i-a, aphiffiny, apifiny, um a moment of clarity... i just realized how i come up with most of my rythme scymes... I like automately (or at least try) to get the syllables to line up and if i can't, then i have them do a swing type thing, by over or under compensating the syllables inversely in the next line... Wow, i have to look over some my older stuff to see if my Hypothosis holds true... revery the dreamlost **leaves running off to the far off lab of the dreamlost** ------------------------ **runs back gasping** okay did some analysis... turns out is not as clear cut as all that... Seem's by dropping a syllable here there it drives a beat of a particular line one way of the other... this is fun, but my hands are getting tired counting syllables... hmm, i work more this later rev... Edited by: reverie at: 6/17/02 5:54:57 pm
Guest Signe Green Posted June 18, 2002 Report Posted June 18, 2002 *big smiles* Rev you are a complete sweetheart and a great poet, even if you can't spell epiphany. ;o) I have always been immensely proud to have you think I make a good muse, and I have always been in awe of the things you write for me. *HUGE hugs and kisses him on the cheek* Signe's Homepage
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