Guest Mira Posted June 16, 2002 Report Posted June 16, 2002 I am a Looking glass Simple at a glance Just a thin metal frame and a glass lens Fragile, but aren't we all Come look into my eye The view is distorted at first But after a while you can see the world In all its beauty and glory You can see all of its crimes, all of its sins, and all of its lies Look away child, before you see too much. All these moments will be lost in time, like tears in the rain.
reverie Posted June 16, 2002 Report Posted June 16, 2002 Hmm, nice work... got the whole duality thing going... Keep it up... i'm sure the almost dragon guy will come out of hiding enventually... Don't think you need the contradition though, it just sorta just sticks out... btw, i'm still a novice, so what the heck do i know anyway... revery the dreamlost... Edited by: reverie at: 6/16/02 4:15:44 pm
Guest Mira Posted June 16, 2002 Report Posted June 16, 2002 Thank you Edited by: Mira at: 6/16/02 7:42:58 pm
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