Falcon2001 Posted June 13, 2002 Report Posted June 13, 2002 This song is dedicated to every single jerk that decided that I was an easy target. It's also dedicated to every problem I've ever run into, and every difficulty I've overcome. The words in (parentheses) are yelled in the background. Smack me down again Taste the blood on my face Another lying friend I've fallen into disgrace (Pain!) Feed the demons! (Kain!) The Devil's branding! (Stained!) A bonded freeman! BUT I'M STILL STANDING! (Pain!) You think that you won! (Kain!) You're still demanding! (Stained!) The darkened dead one! BUT I'M STILL STANDING! You've knocked me down before Drank my soul like a river, liar Treated me like a whore And slammed me into the mire (chorus) I'm still standing, you little worm I'm still standing before the storm Nothing else can knock me down I'm stronger than your bloody crown (chorus) A fist to my face, there's a treat A friendly abuse, sealed your fate You'll never be my equal, fool Because you're so @#%$ cruel (chorus) There is nothing... There is nothing... There is nothing else but The soul of flame, The eyes of thunder, The heart betrayed So come on down And face the end You're much weaker Liar friend You're a liar! (chorus x2) Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta
Nyyark Posted June 13, 2002 Report Posted June 13, 2002 Interesting. I think it was well written, even if it wasn't in my tastes.
Rahsash Geldich Posted June 13, 2002 Report Posted June 13, 2002 A dark triumph, for lies seem to coat us all in black soot. Make sure you can wash, not just dust the hurt off. A nice song, one I think would turn out very well, I can almost feel the bass beats.
Guest Fire Walker Posted June 13, 2002 Report Posted June 13, 2002 It is well written and I could relate to it very much. I would write a follow up, but you can do a better job. Maybe something about people being nice to you. Which part is the chorus? Edited by: Fire Walker at: 6/14/02 6:23:57 am
Falcon2001 Posted June 14, 2002 Author Report Posted June 14, 2002 (Pain!) Feed the demons! (Kain!) The Devil's branding! (Stained!) A bonded freeman! BUT I'M STILL STANDING! (Pain!) You think that you won! (Kain!) You're still demanding! (Stained!) The darkened dead one! BUT I'M STILL STANDING! That's the chorus. Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta
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