Nyyark Posted June 4, 2002 Report Posted June 4, 2002 Alone again By Myself Wondeing my ways Hidden trails with unplanned stays "why?" rolls softly a whisper on my lips An unfelt emotion escaping in whisps Hidden from Me A spider hides her brood Fears being devoured By Myself
Rahsash Geldich Posted June 5, 2002 Report Posted June 5, 2002 I like this, it feels like you're trying to pretend nothing's wrong, even though you knoe it is, and the usage of a spider is a good metaphor for such a thing. Of course, I could be completely off trck of what you were thinking.... Ah well, very good anyways
Guest Xradion Posted June 7, 2002 Report Posted June 7, 2002 It's "the dark side of the force" meets little miss muffet . Just kidding, of course. Nice job! Xradion, The Horny Druid, Scholar of the Ancient Arts, Holder of the Eye of Odin. "The only emperor is the emperor of ice-cream." -Wallace Stevens "When at home, do as the Homans do." –Xradion
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