Rahsash Geldich Posted May 29, 2002 Report Posted May 29, 2002 Everything I've been waiting for Has just fallen into place And all the random pieces Have come in from outer space Maybe I wasn't so wrong after all The knots have all untied and the strings sing This melody makes a harmony Let's all dance within the faery ring. Know where you stand and lean out to see What lies beyond should meet up with the now Watch what you say, but don't be silent Enjoy the moment, even more the how. Life happens, so make sure you're living Depression is no excuse, though its there But I know from my own expirence- Once overcome, it can be a stair. No matter what happens, don't suicide Realizing you hate your life means improve. To end it early is giving up, so live For those who couldn't, those remov'd. It's all good, and I'm still moving on Know that your outlook is everything. Find a creative outlet, drain all hate And soon your life strings too will sing
Nyyark Posted May 29, 2002 Report Posted May 29, 2002 I like it! I love having a good day. And this poem helps me to remember those when I'm not.
Gyrfalcon Posted May 30, 2002 Report Posted May 30, 2002 *Gyr dubs this a good-day poem and reminds himself to read it when he's feeling down* *applauds!*
HopperWolf Posted May 30, 2002 Report Posted May 30, 2002 this is a great poem. Does a good job. It's often difficult to get past depression, and it can last and effect everyone aruond you. This does a great job, putting things in perspective. Very feel good yay.
Rahsash Geldich Posted May 30, 2002 Author Report Posted May 30, 2002 I would like to take this opportunity to spread this message: And there was peace, happiness, spicy monkies, & oompa loompas across the land. Not to mention much rejoicing. Sorry everyone, I'm in a super insanely happy mood, and I must further spread it! ::skips off to do some silly thing to exert some of her positive energy::
Nyyark Posted May 30, 2002 Report Posted May 30, 2002 Depression is an infectious rot. Don't keep light of your enthusiasm from burning it away.
Falcon2001 Posted May 31, 2002 Report Posted May 31, 2002 *Wanders in with a flamethrower, looking for Oompa-Loompas* Okay, where are the suckers, I got a call of some of 'em in this sector...grr, there's one! *Sprays the little demon thing with liquid flame, and watches it burn* Heh, after that fifth grade play of being a little Oompa Loompa, I'm no longer as...tolerant of the little buggers...that and months of playing Diablo II against evil demon things that really COULD be Oompas in disguise. Or maybe it's their true form. Oh well, I always thought Happiness's melody was the Theme from Worms, but okay, this is really cool too. Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta
Guest Xradion Posted June 3, 2002 Report Posted June 3, 2002 Nice. Simple form, yet very meaningful. Good to have an uplifting poem in here every now and then. I also like the use of suicide as a verb. Xradion, The Horny Druid, Scholar of the Ancient Arts, Holder of the Eye of Odin. "The only emperor is the emperor of ice-cream." -Wallace Stevens "When at home, do as the Homans do." –Xradion
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