HopperWolf Posted May 29, 2002 Report Posted May 29, 2002 Two wolves, lovers of the night, On a mud red bed of roses, Share entwined in passion’s height, Innocence in human delight, Which the animal inside opposes. Two wolves, lovers in darkness, They lay breathless still completed, Held arms around in love’s embrace, Sharp yellow eyes drawn to their face, Passionate in loneliness defeated. Two wolves, lovers at the dusk, Intruded by unwelcome dawn, Tamed by their night’s fragmented husk, Forced in following nights to trust, With last embrace they flee into the morn. Two wolves, lovers of the night, In love’s comfort bed they lie, Think on the wild beauty in their sight, Trust in their faith to heal their plight, But still love their spirits in their night’s sky.
The Portrait of Zool Posted May 30, 2002 Report Posted May 30, 2002 I really like this. Finally, something other than a whining lament of passion's frustrations. Well done - good structure too. ~Zool~ Ancient, The Pen is Mightier than the Sword. Bard of Terra, Patron Saint of Aspiring Bards. Elder than dirt, more foolish than a jester, able to trip over the smallest logic in a single step. It's... Oh, you know.
Guest Xradion Posted June 3, 2002 Report Posted June 3, 2002 I share Zool's sentiments. Just letting you know I read this. Nice work! Xradion, The Horny Druid, Scholar of the Ancient Arts, Holder of the Eye of Odin. "The only emperor is the emperor of ice-cream." -Wallace Stevens "When at home, do as the Homans do." –Xradion
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