Guest Xradion Posted May 10, 2002 Report Posted May 10, 2002 Like the great oak tree You stand before me, Your roots gripping the rich earth. You hold me up High above any danger. I lie in the cradle Of your branches, an infant, Shaded from the burning ball in the sky By your protective leaves. You nourish me, Planting seeds in my head That will one day sprout Into saplings of their own. And when the wind whirled You held me tight. And when the bow broke, You were there To catch the cradle. But then one day, I fell from you, And sunk into The ground. The soil was moist, You had kept it that way, And so, I quickly blossomed. I stand before you now, Able to give you shade From the scorching sun And some shelter From the howling wind. And I thank you for all That you have given me And I am grateful For the chance To return the favor. *Just in time for mother's day! For all those that forgot to buy a card, feel free to use my poem. Just don't plagiarize any of my other poems or I'll be forced to send this guy after you:. LOL. You're all so creative anyway, I'm sure you wouldn't need to use my poem. Besides, these are just my feelings towards my mother. Still, I hope this poem brings out the mother's day spirit, not just today, but every day.* Xradion, The Horny Druid, Scholar of the Ancient Arts, Holder of the Eye of Odin. "The only emperor is the emperor of ice-cream." -Wallace Stevens "When at home, do as the Homans do." –Xradion Edited by: Xradion at: 5/12/02 2:12:40 am
Nyyark Posted May 12, 2002 Report Posted May 12, 2002 Nice, I don't know if using your poem would be Mother's Day spirt though...
Guest Xradion Posted May 12, 2002 Report Posted May 12, 2002 Yeah, I was just kidding about that, because as I said, I know that none of you would anyway. Ugh! I forgot to write a father's day follow-up poem, though. Oh well. Guess I still got some time.
Gyrfalcon Posted May 13, 2002 Report Posted May 13, 2002 *Gyrfalcon applauds* This is actually an excellent poem, or at least I think so. I like the progression of the poem, from childhood to adulthood, and the themes and references to other poems you've woven into it.
Guest Xradion Posted May 13, 2002 Report Posted May 13, 2002 As always, thanks for your comments, Gyr (I'll never understand how you manage to respond to everything here and still moderate the Archmage UBBs, but I'm sure glad you do). Actually, references to previous poems in this one weren't intentional. I just tend to use a lot of the same imagery. The only intentional reference here is of course to the nursery rhyme "rockaby baby," and that may have been all you were referring to. At any rate, glad you liked it. Xradion, The Horny Druid, Scholar of the Ancient Arts, Holder of the Eye of Odin. "The only emperor is the emperor of ice-cream." -Wallace Stevens "When at home, do as the Homans do." –Xradion
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