reverie Posted May 10, 2002 Report Posted May 10, 2002 hiya... am recovering from short bout of food poisoning, so have loads of time now... plus am on vacation... so i figure i'd see what i could write in 5 minutes again... Gentleman start the clock: one, two, three, once again go.... Traveling this time again always going where i have not been It always sad to leave a friend Not always glad to begin again... Time cannot be stop or revived To a place where friendship thrived... If i leave behind, so be it then Now go forward now, and make ammends. ...... well not bad i suppose... a little cliche and nonsensical, but was fun... revery the dreamlost
Guest Xradion Posted May 10, 2002 Report Posted May 10, 2002 This reminds me of something...wait! It's coming back to me! "Ti--i-iime, Why you punish me-eee? Like a friend with somewhere to go-o, you leave meeeee cryin', cryin'." (Sorry, couldn't resist). Probably Hootie's best song in my opinion. I was never really a big Hootie and the Blowfish fan. I like this poem though. Nice improv! Keep it up. Xradion, The Horny Druid, Scholar of the Ancient Arts, Holder of the Eye of Odin. "The only emperor is the emperor of ice-cream." -Wallace Stevens "When at home, do as the Homans do." –Xradion
reverie Posted May 10, 2002 Author Report Posted May 10, 2002 hmm, don't recognize the song... though hootie's okay in my book... just okay though, they're alittle too shiny for my taste... revery the dreamlost
Gyrfalcon Posted May 11, 2002 Report Posted May 11, 2002 *Gyrfalcon applauds* Good work for five minutes. Perhaps you could extend it? I sense the start of a good song or poem there.
reverie Posted May 11, 2002 Author Report Posted May 11, 2002 um, okay... sure why not... I'm been so racked for time lately i couldn't write anything... oh btw here's something i recently discovered. Um, if your really sick and you have really kewl vivid dreams at the same time. Then, it prolly means that your in the middle of bad fervor. Despite the fact that the dreams are really really kewl, it would really be in you best interest to wake up and get help and not just roll over and try to get back to the really kewl part... Also... if ever given the choice between the chicken or sushi on an international inflight meal, pick the chicken... Or better yet don't pick anything at all... stick with the juices... trust me on this... revery the dreamlost
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