Guest ArawnD Posted April 17, 2002 Report Posted April 17, 2002 Tick,Tock. Watch the clock, a face that seldom lies. Tick,Tock. Watch the clock, count the seconds til you die. Tick,Tock. Watch the clock, the master and I it's slave. Tick,Tock. Watch the clock, a torture I cannot brave. Tick,Tock. Smash the clock, smiling as it drops. Tick,Tock. No more clock, but time never stops. The Mad King
Guest Lord Seth Exodus Posted April 18, 2002 Report Posted April 18, 2002 Different, simple, well done. I've always thougt time to be fasinating; the strongest force in our lives, and it doesn't even exsist. -Seth Exodus Initiate of The Pen
Gyrfalcon Posted April 18, 2002 Report Posted April 18, 2002 *Gyr applauds* I like it, though I'll note that I actually find a tickling clock soothing. *grin*
Justin Silverblade Posted April 19, 2002 Report Posted April 19, 2002 A ticking clock, I find Gyr, that it inenhances my mood. If I am mellow, then it sooths me. If I am anxious, then it makes time go by sooooooo much slower. Wow, ArawnD, you've written some good poetry. I like it. Edited by: Justin Silverblade at: 4/18/02 8:27:16 pm
Guest ArawnD Posted April 19, 2002 Report Posted April 19, 2002 Flattery will get you everywhere. The Mad King
Gwaihir Posted April 19, 2002 Report Posted April 19, 2002 You should try flattering the clock then. (hmm, maybe flattering time woudl be more useful) ---------- I want to be page 93 of Pineapples, the Avian Crows-Nyyark
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