Prayer of a lovesick high schooler

[Rahsash Geldich]

God, I pray that you, tonight

Will aid my crush's closed sight.

May he see my staring eyes

May he understand my sighs.

And now that he can see,

May he come to like me!

[Gyrfalcon]

*Gyr thinks thats what friends are for- either the subtle dropping of hints or the full out

 

'Listen, doofus, Rahsash (not knowing your true name) likes you.'*

 

Still, good luck, Rahsash!

 

*applauds the short poem*

[Justin Silverblade]

Good feeling behind it too!

 

~Bravo~

[Guest Adelaide Erindale]

Oh my gosh... I totally know what you're talking about... but that's ok, I shouldn't go into it here, probably... people don't want to hear my sobbing and whining *smiles slightly*.

 

Like I said, I can really identify with you, and it was a very good (short but sweet) verse.

[Tralla]

haha ohh I know this experience as well. Keep it up, Rahsash =)

[Guest Katiya Damodred]

::smiles slightly:: I wish I could be as a good a poet as you...sad as it is, I'm losing my gifts, my sight and sound and my talent for writing any of it. And I wish I could more eloquently put into words how...

 

ANGRY I am that you never talk to me about this stuff ::winks to show she doesn't mean it::

 

SAD I am that he's a loser and won't talk to you or nuffin

::makes an angry face to show she does mean that::

 

DEPRESSED I am that you can't come right out and just ask him out and have him say yes

 

::utters a small scream and begins pleading with people to get her shoe down from the exceptionally tall cabinet that a person of her short 5' .5" stature couldn't even dream of getting::

 

::throws the pitiful look in for good measure::

[Ozymandias]

I know the feeling, too.

I wish you the best.

 

/me reaches up and politely hands Katiya down her shoe