Justin Silverblade Posted April 9, 2002 Report Posted April 9, 2002 Much too Often I have seen the stars, Much too often. In soft prayer I look above, And wish them to soften, The blows of life. To bring to me fate, Of good news. In their great, glowing glory, Point to me and choose, That wanted path. I look above and ask, Take me there. I’ve not the will to walk myself. I look on and stare, And sit, and sigh. I have seen the stars, Wished a word. Wasted my time on luck, With a thought too absurd To speak aloud. I have wasted hopes, Dreams to be, Upon the stars so great. Silence, their reply to me, Much too often. Edited by: Justin Silverblade at: 4/8/02 10:04:31 pm
Ozymandias Posted April 9, 2002 Report Posted April 9, 2002 "Stars can't talk." -Cohen the Barbarian Ouch. Very good. :>)
Cyril Darkcloud Posted April 9, 2002 Report Posted April 9, 2002 Far too seldom I chance to read a bit of verse that speaks to me as this one did. Very nice work, Justin. Edited by: Cyril Darkcloud at: 4/9/02 7:47:40 am
Tralla Posted April 13, 2002 Report Posted April 13, 2002 ooh... we just had to do a mean essay in English comparing two star-related poems... *twitch* I like this one soo much better =) Well done, Sil.
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