Vincent Silver Posted March 11, 2002 Report Posted March 11, 2002 This is a poem about something that takes as much as it gives...time (again off the top of my head) What can give you new choices And slowly change the land What can kill offs everthing in the end Even the most powerfull man Its grasp around the world you cannot see But is the giver, without it you cannot be It's called Time...time..time ______ "Fire" is a poem I wrote for my 8th. grade reading class Why is it that makes us amire This wonderfull thing called fire What about it takes us higher And never lets us down It's wicked red glare wipes acrros our face As it goes along on its deadly race Killing everthing in its path But we still amire...fire _____ Thanks you...
Guest Chris Stephens Posted March 12, 2002 Report Posted March 12, 2002 I sense talent here that i've never seen before...
Vincent Silver Posted March 12, 2002 Author Report Posted March 12, 2002 Well thanks for the opinion and the great honor of seeing you sence I can hardly ever do it in real life...
Guest Heart Like A Hole Posted March 12, 2002 Report Posted March 12, 2002 Your poetry is very powerful, and I am particularly fond of the one about time... Intriguing, to say the least. ~Porcelain "Heart Like A Hole"
Falcon2001 Posted March 12, 2002 Report Posted March 12, 2002 Vincent, good work, but cut the crap with chris. I've been talking to him, and you haven't been the greatest friend in the world. If you really want to talk to him, go out of your way and do it, don't just expect him to change his life around to suit your needs. Sometimes you have to be a friend too. Good poem, again. Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta
Vincent Silver Posted March 14, 2002 Author Report Posted March 14, 2002 I wish I call him everday to talk but he never answers me back...I CALL EVER DAY FOR ALMOST A WEEK! You tell HIM something...I want to ends this crap too but I never had a chance!
Peredhil Posted March 14, 2002 Report Posted March 14, 2002 Nice Poems... I rather liked them. Could I request that people keep the raw Real Life issues OFF the boards? They detract from the grandeur of the art being presented here, in my opinion. I realize some people find art in life, but I prefer it one step removed myself, filtered through a poem, song, story or Role-Played Character. It's just... crass I think is the word, to bleed Real Life over the boards. That would be more delicately done in emails, with Courtesy Copies to all parties if a broader audience is required. Peredhil bows Politely and is *POOF* gone again.
reverie Posted March 17, 2002 Report Posted March 17, 2002 write a letter. it's more personal. Good poem on time too. "There is a season turn, turn turn..." ecc. revery the dreamlost "mr. machine your not listening..." the dream continues...
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