Falcon2001 Posted March 11, 2002 Report Posted March 11, 2002 Freeform again...strange for me, but I like writing this way. Snowing colder than the ashes in the hearth Raining harder than the heart in my chest Blowing faster than the end of days Ending Sharper than the sword in my mind Immediate closings to a life of disaster one without cause or meaning to hold life's greatest achievement comes in the closing a bitter feud with almost no end So gather up your hearts and toss them in the fire give yourself into the world don't mind all the fire it's just an illusion It won't burn if you believe hollow faith full of holes and dead ends trapping all of us to forward it's own ends so listen to the prophet and give yourself to the flames and hope that your soul will forgive Immediate closings to a life of disaster now give yourself up and hope for the best... Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta
Guest Heart Like A Hole Posted March 11, 2002 Report Posted March 11, 2002 The first four lines of this poem are very striking... They set the mood for the entire piece and reallly catch my interest. Excellent work, as always, my friend. ~Porcelain "Heart Like A Hole"
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