Guest Balladore Posted March 9, 2002 Report Posted March 9, 2002 I glance across the floor To see her standing there I wish she could see me too Standing here staring at her. When you love someone too, The way I love you… You’ll understand… You have to hold their hand See their beautiful face… Feel their warm embrace Be with them every minute of the day… And never be away. Pounding in my veins I think that I have found The one I’ll always love The music sounds so loud When you love someone too, The way I love you… You’ll understand… You have to hold their hand See their beautiful face… Feel their warm embrace Be with them every minute of the day… And never be away. Though we’re at a concert The music goes over my head All I do is hurt And I find myself having said… When you love someone too, The way I love you… You’ll understand… You have to hold their hand See their beautiful face… Feel their warm embrace Be with them every minute of the day… And never be away.
Gyrfalcon Posted March 9, 2002 Report Posted March 9, 2002 *Gyr applauds* A wonderful song, my friend. I enjoyed reading it and could almost 'hear' the music.
Guest Heart Like A Hole Posted March 9, 2002 Report Posted March 9, 2002 I echo the sentiments of Gyr and must say that this is a particularly beautiful piece of prose. ~Porcelain
Ozymandias Posted March 12, 2002 Report Posted March 12, 2002 Two dancers move to a song about them. I like it.
Guest Lord Seth Exodus Posted March 12, 2002 Report Posted March 12, 2002 A smokey bar, a 1920's jazz band in white dinner jackets, a fore-lorned looking young man gazing at the lady in red across the room from over his glass. I see it all. I love it. The whole idea, so well portrayed, is classic. Very well done, my friend. -Seth Exodus Initiate of The Pen
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