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ooc:just a poem I am making up as I go along (almost a song)

 

My heart burns for you

 

My heart burns neverending

 

Does your heart burn too?

 

Or are these crasy thoughts I'm Thinking

 

Your looks,your mind,your everthing encant me

 

Almost like you put a spell apon me

 

I can't get my mind off of you

 

I hope you can't too

 

Because my heart burns for you...

 

Vincent Silver AKA Blake Cooley

Guest Heart Like A Hole
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I'm quite impressed... It's short but profound, and the fact that you made it up as you went along speaks highly of your talent as a poet. I hope to read more of your work in the future.

 

 

 

~Porcelain

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