Guest Jess Posted February 11, 2002 Report Posted February 11, 2002 A large mountain lion with two green stripes upon her head strutes into Wyvern's office (he's finally here!) with every possible confidence. Before his eyes the cat is transformed into a tall, curvey, woman with golden eyes, and long golden hair with, what would be her bangs if they were cut short, dyed green. She smiles at him and says, "I'm so glad your here! I've read some of your writing and I like it. I was wondering if you'd read a small bit of mine and tell me what you think?" "Of course" he replies. So the woman hands him a piece of parchment, turns back into the mountain lion, and calmy strides out the door. Listen I've spent my life talking, Calmly, sweetly, with honey added to it. I've tried not to get mad, I've tried to stay calm. But you never listen, You're so busy, so busy. I want to show you myself, I want you to want me, And finally, I'm starting to get angry. You didn't listen when I needed it, Crying softly in the corner. You didn't listen when I wanted it, Sitting there with tears gathering. And you're not even listening now, Standing, screaming for all the world to hear. But I'll show you, What's in my head, My heart, my soul. I'll show you how your slinking, With your tail between your legs. Someday I'll show you, What you could never see. And when you say, You've never wanted me, I'll shed one tear, And walk away. Jess- One who is cying for what she can never have.
Gyrfalcon Posted February 12, 2002 Report Posted February 12, 2002 *Gyr applauds* Ooo... make him perk up. *smiles*
Falcon2001 Posted February 12, 2002 Report Posted February 12, 2002 I'm not innocent...I'm not innocent...I'm not innocent, I'M JUST CRAZY! lol Go jess! I've already told you this poem is fantastic...etc...etc...but now you know again. Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword President of the Peredhil Fan Club Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta
Guest Jess Posted February 12, 2002 Report Posted February 12, 2002 LOL! Thank you both. Gyr- how exactly would I make him perk up? Don't forget that I'm new and could use a few pointers on how everything works. BTW I read some of your other stuff and I wanted to post my replies, but I was a little late. I just wanted to say they were all very good. *The one with greem wisps in her hair returns the applause* Falcon- For every kind word you've ever bestowed upon me, and will ever bestow upon me, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. I wish I had a better way of showing you what a friend you will always have in me than sending you to the counsilor, but what's a girl to do?
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