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[Rahsash Geldich]

I am the Embodiment of Evil,

I am the Portrayer of Light,

I love to Wreak Havoc

And give the Blind Sight

 

I have a blue million Faces

And not all are Masks.

I am One and am All

In case Anyone Asks

 

I Hate and I Love,

I Live and I Die.

All for the Fun;

Never the Why

 

I Plot and I Track,

I wander The World.

Real or Fantasy

Together, all swirled.

[Guest Lord Seth Exodus]

Bravo! *applaudes* Grand rhyme, it flows very well. I love the contraversial ideas; Christ and anti-Christ, good and evil, light and dark, true and false. It's thought provoking, at least to me. Again, kudos to you.

 

 

 

Seth Exodus

[Tralla]

Oooh very spiffy. I like the contrasting ideas, too. =) (You stole my line, Seth! Grr!)

 

"I have a blue million Faces

And not all are Masks."

 

I like these lines a lot, they really jump out at me. But then, I have the whole fascination with masks, and images, and personalities, and stuff... yeah... Very cool poem. =)

[Rahsash Geldich]

::recognizes a fellow Calvin and Hobbes Reader in Seth:: I like writing in metaphor, but sometimes I get so far into it, the meaning is lost!

[Guest Lord Seth Exodus]

You pegged me, Rahsash; I love Calvin and Hobbes. Bill Watterson is a genieus. Keep up the good work.

 

Sorry to steal your line, Tralla, my dear; just have to be a little quicker

 

-Seth Exodus

[Ozymandias]

No wonder your imagery is all so epic. ;>) But seriously, It's very, VERY evocative of myth and painters like Michael Whalen or the brothers Hildebrandt for me.

 

 

 

I get the nagging feeling sometimes that my own writing sounds a little too much like the newest episode of Spaceman Spiff. Edited by: Ozymandias the Elder at: 1/31/02 6:18:52 pm

[Rahsash Geldich]

::grins:: Then we'll be intreped poetry daydreamers as a group eh?

[Peredhil]

I love Calvin and Hobbs...

 

But also your poem.

 

I get a picture of Shiva or Kali when I read that; The duality of the Hindu dieties.

 

 

 

-Peredhil