Falcon2001 Posted January 25, 2002 Report Posted January 25, 2002 Shower Like Sun's first rays on a frigid winter day The water, warm and wet, from my faucet Helps me greet the day with life I revel in the first freezing splash and thrill in the heat of the full blast My skin is washed clean by the falling rain And I feel a new man While I sing along in my deep voice to the music that I play with my stereo Sometimes rock, sometimes not But always adding to the spell that my morning ritual throws over me like a blanket thrown over a freezing man or a cup of water to a thirsty man I love my shower for what it does to me Revives me Resets me Restarts me Yes, I'm back, and now I guess I'll start writing again. Cioden Darkeye Page of The Mighty Pen Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses Ashaman - WoT - Blitz II Council - The Hunters - Blitz II Leisure Officer - SFV Ultima - Beta
Tralla Posted January 25, 2002 Report Posted January 25, 2002 *first comment happy dance* an interesting topic, but a valid one. There is a reason I take a shower every morning, besides cleanliness. I've even scared myself a few times by looking in the mirror after getting up... oi. =D Good writing, keep it up!
Gyrfalcon Posted January 26, 2002 Report Posted January 26, 2002 Yay! *applauds* While I'm an end of the day sort of shower taker, I love this poem... and a nice hot shower is *so* relaxing after a long day.
Ozymandias Posted January 28, 2002 Report Posted January 28, 2002 A "Well said!" and a hearty "Hear, hear!" Have you ever seen the movie 'Shower'? If not, I highly recommend it to a conossieur such as yourself. Seriously. It's one of my all-time favorites.
Peredhil Posted February 5, 2002 Report Posted February 5, 2002 Peredhil laughs softly. How wonderfully whimsical. Although given the sleep schedules around my home, if you played music or sang in the shower, someone would prolly try to recreate the shower scene from Psycho... You know, when you're just writing light verse, you're a marvelous pleasure to read. It's nice to see some fun work from you. -Peredhil
Guest Jess Posted February 9, 2002 Report Posted February 9, 2002 Is that why you always make me late? LOL! If it is than it's a damn good reason. I dont think I know of a better one!
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