Rahsash Geldich Posted January 13, 2002 Report Posted January 13, 2002 I tried to reach out to you today. I don't think you noticed, but its okay; I'll reach out to someone else. I wanted to tell you I am acheiving. In myself, I have started believing. But its okay, I'll tell someone else. I wanted help with my problems For they feel like no-one-can-solve-ems But I suppose I can tell someone else. I guess another day will have to do, I'd still pick no one over you. As much as I tell someone else
Peredhil Posted January 14, 2002 Report Posted January 14, 2002 Ouch. As a father who is sometimes "too busy", this makes me stop and consider once again. Good (pointed) writing. -Peredhil
Rahsash Geldich Posted January 15, 2002 Author Report Posted January 15, 2002 Thanks for replying, I liked that one too, it turned out better than I thought it would because I thought the rythms were off...
Tralla Posted January 17, 2002 Report Posted January 17, 2002 The words themselves, and the message they sent, were so powerful I didn't even notice the rhythm was off (if it was). =) Wonderful poem.
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