Gwaihir Posted December 8, 2001 Report Posted December 8, 2001 Not my usual type of poem at all, not sure if I like it, but *shrug* Before we met, I’d never cried, Before we met, I’d never cared. Before we met, life was simple, Before we met, I slept all night. Now I’m awake missing you babe. Now I’m awake hearing your laugh, Or I’m awake, wishing I did. Now I’m awake, and it’s your fault! Should I have kissed? Knowing I’d change, Would I have kissed? Knowing you’d die, Could I have kissed? Knowing it all, I’m glad I kissed.
Guest andrea hawk Posted December 12, 2001 Report Posted December 12, 2001 I like it! It's really tender... Plus I think I like it because I've asked myself the same questions you asked... except for the knowing you'd die part... but I am glad it ended positive with the I'm glad I kissed. I think it's good even if your not sure you like it.
Peredhil Posted March 3, 2003 Report Posted March 3, 2003 Before we met, I slept all night. I love that line...
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