Guest Dragcor Warwick Posted November 25, 2001 Report Posted November 25, 2001 Temptation- Why won't you leave me alone? Lurking Every Corner, everywhere I go Self Control- Don't turn your back on me now When I need you the most Constant pressure tests my will My will or my won't My Self Control escapes from me still... Hypocrite- How could you be so cruel and expect my faith in return? Resistance- Is not as hard as it seems When you close the door I spent so long trusting in you I trust you forgot Just when I thought I believed in you... It's time for me to deal Becoming all too real living in fear- Why did you lie and pretend? This has come to an end I'll never trust you again It's time you made your amends Look in the mirror my friend "That I haven't behaved as I should" "Everything you need is around you. The only danger is inside you." "I thought you could control life,but it's not like that. There are things you can't control." Let's stare the problem right in the eye It's plagued me from coast to coast Racing the clock to please everyone All but the one who matters the most Reflections of reality are slowly coming into view How in the hell could you possibly forgive me? After all the hell I put you through It's time for me to deal Becoming all too real living in fear- Why'd I betray my friend? Lying until the end Living life so pretend It's time to make my amends I'll never hurt you again
Guest Dragcor Warwick Posted November 29, 2001 Report Posted November 29, 2001 i give up, you all have fun without me
Guest Dragcor Warwick Posted December 12, 2001 Report Posted December 12, 2001 well, i see that i should apologize, for ever thinking i could have fun without such people, yadda yadda yadda (smacks kin, STOP IT) anywho, i think im done now, yes...erm....yeah, ok
Guest CloudBurn Posted December 21, 2001 Report Posted December 21, 2001 High claps for thee! The energy is there, work at channeling it (that's the hard part ) THE REGULATOR All your base are belong to us.
Rahsash Geldich Posted February 12, 2002 Report Posted February 12, 2002 I think my favorite part about his is how you adress your characteristics as if they are little, seperate parts of yourself
Ozymandias Posted February 14, 2002 Report Posted February 14, 2002 At the risk of sounding too esoteric, this reads like a song that doesn't need music. I like it.
Bhurin Posted February 15, 2002 Report Posted February 15, 2002 Bhurin stands silent for some time, his eyes full and round, seeming to blind over as he thinks over the words... Dragcor Warwick... A truly amazing and interesting piece. Beg your pardon if my responce is somewhat un-articualte, but you surpised me just now. That sudden jump from free/blank verse to intense and repetitive rhyming caught me completely off guard. I felt a surge of emotion... Like a climax building in a song... And, if I may make an observation, I made special notice of how you capitialized the names of the qualities you were describing, as if they were living things and you were, in fact, addressing by name. Was this intentional? Beg your pardon, but sometimes grammar forces me to notice things like that. But please forgive me for rambling. Bhurin shakes his head, as though knocking dust from it My thoughts aren't clear right now and obviously my words must suffer for it. An excellant piece. Signed- Edited by: Bhurin at: 2/14/02 10:13:05 pm
Peredhil Posted March 4, 2003 Report Posted March 4, 2003 Reflects on the irony of the posted petulance at not receiving replies to a plagarized work.... "The Mirror" lyrics originally created by The Dream Theater. Find it here.
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