Falcon2001 Posted January 8, 2003 Report Posted January 8, 2003 I can't wait to find you there Waiting at the end of the road Something wild and free and fair I want to meet you Something that I know I need something burns inside of me What is this vision before me? Give me the answers Hey! I wanna know What it's all about Hey! I wanna see What's waiting for me... At the end of the road The answers fly softly away What is my purpose on this earth? Swallow me up and set me free Look into the mirror A twisted mad reality Something never meant to be I can see the light And it's blinding me Hey! I wanna know What's the fuss's about Hey! I wanna see What's waiting for me... At the end of the road... Where the bricks stop And the road is slurred And the puddles gather rain Where I need no help to see What is in front of me And the rain clears my eyes... At the end of the road.
Gyrfalcon Posted January 8, 2003 Report Posted January 8, 2003 Hey, pretty good Falcon! A question: is this meant to be a poem or a song? It can work either way, I'm just curious if its meant to be sung or not.
Peredhil Posted January 8, 2003 Report Posted January 8, 2003 Feels like a song to me, even if it wasn't meant that way. Falcon, you just continue to get better as you go. Do you even realize how much you've grown since you first came to the Pen? I'm very proud of you. -P We do not write because we want to; we write because we have to. W. Somerset Maugham
Falcon2001 Posted January 8, 2003 Author Report Posted January 8, 2003 Thanks everyone, it actually was meant as a song, and I actually have a guitar line to it I created by messing with the smells like teen spirit guitar line.
Vlad Posted January 9, 2003 Report Posted January 9, 2003 Very good... I can't really think of anything to say, It creates powerful imagery...
Guest Rune Posted January 9, 2003 Report Posted January 9, 2003 The imagery struck me as well. Was very easy to picture the setting and follow an imaginary figure as it traveled throughout the poem/song.
Archive Posted January 30, 2003 Report Posted January 30, 2003 Falcon2001 Poet Posts: 456 (1/8/03 4:57:23 pm) Reply Heh heh heh -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Thanks everyone, it actually was meant as a song, and I actually have a guitar line to it I created by messing with the smells like teen spirit guitar line.
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