Guest GriZzmo Posted January 7, 2003 Report Posted January 7, 2003 Coiled like a starving worm With a mind yearning for light The closing of a life's term An angel rises tonight - Not quite sure wether or not the third line is passable english but you'll just have to take it like it is anways. -- I don't know what I'm saying but I do know I say things that you don't understand. If you do understand what I am saying then you are wrong. -- Sometimes I aim for poetic beauty, sometimes for wisdom or thoughtfull words. I usually end up just being weird.
Justin Silverblade Posted January 9, 2003 Report Posted January 9, 2003 I can't comment too much about it, simply because it goes over my head, GriZzmo, without me putting a lot of in depth study into it... but I really do like it. The mood is neat, and the emotion is certainly well conveyed. Good work.
Guest Blondemoon Posted January 9, 2003 Report Posted January 9, 2003 It reminds me a lot of the saying that for every person that leaves this world, at the same moment, another is born. Very nice.
Guest GriZzmo Posted January 10, 2003 Report Posted January 10, 2003 Thank you, thank you. What I really like about writing slightly vague stuff is that people often interpret it in ways I certainly didn't intend. I find it more rewarding to make people think than to tell them what to think.
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