Justin Silverblade Posted January 6, 2003 Report Posted January 6, 2003 Hush A single soft sound, Drips from crimson lips, None more. Nothing special - but I'm trying to get back my muse, and you know what they say - baby steps. Tryed to pack as much feeling into this as possible. Hope you enjoyed. - Justin
Guest crowgirl1126 Posted January 8, 2003 Report Posted January 8, 2003 I relly like themood this poem presents. I am still waiting for Peredhil to respod with his haiku. Justin Silverblade, have you notyet creatd the poem to void out your weenie award? Or are you too proud??
Peredhil Posted January 8, 2003 Report Posted January 8, 2003 Peredhil whispers That really needs no reply, complete in and of itself. I can't come up with anything worthy to match it at the moment... We do not write because we want to; we write because we have to. W. Somerset Maugham
Justin Silverblade Posted January 9, 2003 Author Report Posted January 9, 2003 Thanks guy and gal. It's appreciated.
Gwaihir Posted January 9, 2003 Report Posted January 9, 2003 few people, certainly not I, can make haikus that are correct in style as well as in form...good stuff!
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