Vlad Posted December 31, 2002 Report Posted December 31, 2002 (edited) Darkness falls, life begins. Quiet rustling all around, In the Dark, life's abound. The beast arises from his slumber, Then come more, in swarms they number, Through the night, creatures lumber. Copyright 2004 Vlad Edited July 7, 2004 by Vlad
Guest Carlyan the Wise Posted December 31, 2002 Report Posted December 31, 2002 Thought invoking. Well written, Vlad, gives me that "hmmm..." feeling... I like!
Vlad Posted January 1, 2003 Author Report Posted January 1, 2003 I meant to write a fourth verse to wrap it up, but nothing came
reverie Posted January 1, 2003 Report Posted January 1, 2003 hmm... here some words of encoragement.... Never, never, never, never, NEVER give up. -Sir winston churchill... rev...
Guest Rune Posted January 1, 2003 Report Posted January 1, 2003 Ooo creepy! *shivers thinking of spiders for some reason* Very very cool. Thanks for sharing!
Vincent Silver Posted January 1, 2003 Report Posted January 1, 2003 *claps hands slowly* I like the fact that it leave a lot to the immagintion but still paints a mental image...
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