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14 DEC 2002… Theme of Signe

 

Long Distance…

 

Pulled apart by life again

But love found me, so I should grin

Though we live so far apart

-we live so far apart…

 

Staying brave by the countless days

Though, I cry within…

Just to hear you smile again.

-Just to hear you smile within

 

So over the phone and on the screen

She wrote me a letter, said I know what you mean…

 

A few moments longer and I can see you too

A few moments longer, for a dream to come true…

 

Oh why can’t it be today…

Why can’t it be today…

 

When, I want you.

-All alone,

Why go away?

 

Seen, so many miles

-So long

Wish you could stay

 

 

Don’t worry love

I’ll see you again

Forgive all the red eyes

And flash me your grin

 

A few moments longers

Not enough,

We need more…

Linger forever

Forget the world

We must soar…

 

 

When, I want you.

-All alone,

Why go away?

 

Seen, so many miles

-So long

Wish you could stay…

 

 

revery

the dreamlost

"dot, dot, dot." (aimee mann)

the dream continues...

 

 

Edited by: reverie  at: 12/14/02 9:59:11 am

Posted

This seems like a country-western song.

Need I say more?

 

 

===Vlad the rage-aholic===

I can't live without rage-ahol!

 

"Me is smart. Dur." -Stick

Posted

hmm, that's always the trouble when i write a song from my head out in poetic form... ya'll can't hear it... the internal meter and flow i usually write into my stand alone poems, just doesn't show so much in the song styled ones...

 

actually, if was more influenced by aimee mann (saw the show the other day in baltimore), pop cliche stuff, and just a hint of anime... hmm, maybe a little too cliche... but hey, i tend do that when writing for others and not myself...

 

ya know i do have something that was supposed to be sorta country... but i can't find it at the moment... i prolly changed it anyway... well if i have any say in the whole thing and have to lean towards anything... it'll be toward the beatles... hey, goals are good things...

 

rev...

Edited by: reverie  at: 12/16/02 4:18:35 am

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