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The Pen is Mightier than the Sword

A not nice poem


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Guest andrea hawk
Posted

Not For You

 

Immigrants, oh immigrants

You dirty, dirty fools

Lady Liberty is not there to welcome you

That torch she holds is a warning

Turn away now or I will burn your home

This place is not for you

You served a purpose back in the day, not anymore

MY family came here when times were hard

Now YOU come here when there is a set minimum wage?

Get out of my country,

You aren’t welcome here

Go back to Mexico

Go back to Russia

Go back to wherever you came from

You’re stinking up my air

You’re stealing my jobs,

And multiplying like cats

So your poor family goes on welfare

And then I have to pay taxes for your ass.

Those vermin children of yours

Are infesting your schools

Lowering our test scores

What’s the matter with you?

Can’t you see?

I hate you

And soon it will be proved,

If you don’t get it now,

With messages of racism written on the walls

In your blood

Our economy sucks

And it’s mostly your fault.

Understand me now, or there’ll be Hell to pay

Stay if you choose

But you’ll live in a slum

With drive by shootings almost everyday

My family was immigrants, and they worked hard

I am now your “middle class”

But rest assured, you will never get this chance

This is not a land of liberty and love

This country is full

No vacancy you see

So check out now your time has expired

Mainly because I don’t want to get fired

It’s not the government that hates you

It’s the people, we are one united

To which you are not a part

If you look around you will see

The Streets are not paved with Gold

At least not for you.

Posted

Wow, an excellent social commentary in poetic form.

 

You know, I think you captured the ugliness of what many all too sweet appearing people think late at night.

 

Very very good.

 

You came to the Pen long ago as the girlfriend of a member - but you've sure carved out your own place all on your own since!

 

Keep them coming.

 

Peredhil

We do not write because we want to; we write because we have to.

 

W. Somerset Maugham

Posted

pretty harsh... but then again so is most that lies underneath... is interesting to note that you can find that attitude you are discribing with every wave of immigrants that ever washed up on the america shores... funny how the past just keep repeating itself...

 

 

revery

the dreamlost

"turn, turn, turn"(byrds,dillion???)

the dream continues...

Guest andrea hawk
Posted

I had to write this poem for school... and everyone was writing about how good immigration was and I decided to write about what everbody really thinks... well maybe not this cynically but still... anyways thank you very much for the compliments.

Guest wordphoole
Posted

NIce work. To take an ugly thing and cloak it in the raiment of verse.

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