Guest Jonathan Wolfe Posted November 27, 2002 Report Posted November 27, 2002 Darkness Wandering sleeping, predawn, city the spires, towers, beams, heights the hell above -- the hell below supremacy Lightness Consciousness sitting, metropolis morning the deeps, cells, badlands, depths the hope imbued in all limitlessness Dreaming real... Dreaming metal... --- "Enternity lies ahead, and behind. Have you drunk your fill?"
Guest Jonathan Wolfe Posted November 27, 2002 Report Posted November 27, 2002 This shall be expanded soon, it's a poem as a counterpart to my story. There is a lot more wanting to get out here. --- "Enternity lies ahead, and behind. Have you drunk your fill?"
SoaringIcarus Posted November 28, 2002 Report Posted November 28, 2002 The last two lines really get me. As if it's dually a description and apathetic advertisement. Great tone. I almost wish you would go into more descriptive detail, to see if what I'm getting from this is similar to what you intend. Post more poems. -Icarus
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