Falcon2001 Posted November 26, 2002 Report Posted November 26, 2002 White Like the inner core of the sun, melting, resonating with anger I feel it burn inside my chest, raw and unyielding Though where can you turn with a loaded cannon When the only target is yourself? When you want to punch a mountain to choke on the rubble To boil the seas and crumble the skies To lengthen your own end Black Boiling tar-hatred, tearing at the flesh Feeding on the corpse and growing stronger I hate so blackly I cannot see, for even worthless things Are worth enough to love, and I am merely a vessel of hate So hell-spawned as to deny one's own existence Just to destroy myself further I hate with passion and ice Nothing could cause this pain but I So I turn my hatred inward And gnaw. Until I eventually explode and Die - have you ever? Wanted to die, that is? So much it hurts to think about it? Where you play with knives because the steel comforts? I wanted it so badly, but I couldn't have it The gift that you would give to an injured DOG! But not to a human who wanted it. Gifts of the flesh seek souls of the fallen. Hello, I've waited here for you, everlong Tonight I throw myself at you, out of the red, out of your head she said
SoaringIcarus Posted November 28, 2002 Report Posted November 28, 2002 Rad imagery. It really makes the poem. As a reader I want to learn more about how the title connects with the content. The ending is peculiarly interesting; red, in my mind, would be the very next color after black or white. Who is everlong? Very nice. -Icarus
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