reverie Posted November 25, 2002 Report Posted November 25, 2002 written as a gift... 21nov02 Flicker When you sing that silly song A quarter’s lapse has come and gone. Counting Candles, oh so bright Seen to rival, a star-field night. Set in flame, you face enframed. Do not dismay, these daunting rays. Within each flame, a scene will show The time you know, from flicker to glow… revery the dreamlost "time cannot be stopped nor revived" the dream continues... Edited by: reverie at: 11/25/02 7:40:38 am
reverie Posted November 27, 2002 Author Report Posted November 27, 2002 oh thanx... oh since your curious, the person i wrote it for just turned 25... and they enjoyed too... revery the dreamlost "lo,lo,lo pal" the dream continues...
SoaringIcarus Posted November 28, 2002 Report Posted November 28, 2002 When you said "a quarter's lapse" do you mean in a sports event, such as a football game? Otherwise, I was contemplating how $.25 passed during a silly song. I hope the reciever enjoyed the poem. Good. -Icarus
Guest wordphoole Posted December 7, 2002 Report Posted December 7, 2002 NIcely done. A sweet and thoughtful gift.
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