Guest SaberCoEP Posted October 31, 2002 Report Posted October 31, 2002 -Removed by X-Sabre's request-
Peredhil Posted May 30, 2003 Report Posted May 30, 2003 Really quality Weenie Award work-off piece. I think this was nicely balanced. I thought the way you tied the uncertainty of dreams to the uncertainty of life elegant. I was particularly struck by the lines: Everything in my dreams seems to be real, your touch, your breath, and even your love. So why is it, that awake, I cannot feel? I've known several people, who've felt so much that they went numb. The idea that feeling returned in dreams, and made them more alive than life is an interesting twist.
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