Annael Posted October 23, 2002 Report Posted October 23, 2002 In the palm of your hand you hold a small yet priceless thing my trust. The trust of someone you love is something that you don't want to waste it is the foundation of things to come. In the palm of your hand you hold a small yet priceless thing my hope. The hope of a lover represents all the dreams and wishes that you can share together. In the palm of your hand you hold a small yet priceless thing my heart. The heart of another is something that should be cherished cause you have unimaginable power with it. In the palm of your hand you hold a small yet priceless thing my soul. I have given all these things to you without knowing it, but with no regrets will you guard, protect and cherish them? Or will I just fade away, as a memory that was in the palm of your hand.
Gyrfalcon Posted October 24, 2002 Report Posted October 24, 2002 A beautiful piece, Annael. Unless I miss my guess, you're talking about love, are you not? *applauds*
reverie Posted October 24, 2002 Report Posted October 24, 2002 very nice... i like it... simple and pure... kewl... rev...
Peredhil Posted October 24, 2002 Report Posted October 24, 2002 touches on the ephemeral nature of feelings. You know, if'n you'd put the word "weenie" in parenthesis in the subject line, you could've used this to work off your Weenie Awardee status... Perhaps an edit? Peredhil sighs in delight as the shimmering purity of her wings never fails to amaze him. "A man's judgment is best when he can forget himself and any reputation he may have acquired and can concentrate wholly on making the right decisions." -ADM Raymond A. Spruance
The Portrait of Zool Posted October 24, 2002 Report Posted October 24, 2002 Clear, and beautiful. ~Zool~ Hell NO I don't want competition - I want something I can win!
Annael Posted October 26, 2002 Author Report Posted October 26, 2002 thank you all. And Pered, I got my weenie award off by making a post already. It's in the roll call thread. I roasted my weenie hehehe
Peredhil Posted October 26, 2002 Report Posted October 26, 2002 Very clever! You'll have to see how Elder Gwaihir judges it. Used to have to be in a thread of its own, but that would save space. Hugs, careful of the wings "A man's judgment is best when he can forget himself and any reputation he may have acquired and can concentrate wholly on making the right decisions." -ADM Raymond A. Spruance
Annael Posted October 27, 2002 Author Report Posted October 27, 2002 *waits for Elder Gwai to respond to the post*
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