Guest Mira Posted September 28, 2002 Report Posted September 28, 2002 I am a looking glass, Simple at a glance. Just a piece of glass Surrounded by a thin metal frame Fragile, but aren't we all. Look into my eye, The view is distorted at first. But then you will see the world, Filled with it's beuaty and love. Filled with it's lies, half-truths, Crimes and sins Look away, before you see to much. All these moments will be lost in time, like tears in the rain. "I'm blinded by the light, of God and truth and right, and I wander through the night without direction" -Paul Simon-
The Portrait of Zool Posted September 29, 2002 Report Posted September 29, 2002 I like it. Honest. Short, but honest.
Guest SaberCoEP Posted October 4, 2002 Report Posted October 4, 2002 Not bad.. Short.. Not much content.. But what it lacks in content, it makes up for in meaning.. Keep it up. For the end is never seen, always heard and rarely understood.
Falcon2001 Posted October 4, 2002 Report Posted October 4, 2002 You know, it's kind of like a prerequisite almost that everyone, sometime in their poetic career, makes a poem called Mirror, looking glass, etc. Just noticed that. Good poem, btw. Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses "Oh my God, I'm LEAKING POETRY!"
reverie Posted October 5, 2002 Report Posted October 5, 2002 revery checks notes... um, don't think i've covered that one yet... maybe a line or two but that's it... oh well looks like i have another project to work on then revery the dreamlost "and the rain came down..." the dream continues... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?
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