Fluke Posted March 11, 2016 Report Posted March 11, 2016 Disclaimer - I write for fun and rarely retouch my work, but I really welcome feedback, critical or otherwise. --- Sing for me He said And so I did Sing harder He cried And so I did Lift your voice to the skies And so I did Lift your voice to the Heavens! But my voice cracked The sound was lost And he left me Sing for me He said And so she did Sing harder He cried And so she did Lift your voice to the skies And so she did Lift your voice to the Heavens! And so she did She was perfect So he worshipped her. 1 Quote
Peredhil Posted March 31, 2016 Report Posted March 31, 2016 Good use of line breaks to imply punctuation. Nicely crafted free-form Quote
TLDunn213 Posted May 3, 2016 Report Posted May 3, 2016 Zatar like. (And it's good to see that others, whose opinions I've come to value, also like your stuff. Looking forward to more.) Quote
Fluke Posted May 4, 2016 Author Report Posted May 4, 2016 (edited) Thank you all! I tend to only write in free form. Haiku's were the only form of poetry that they managed to impress on me properly at school. Sonnets terrify me. Edited May 4, 2016 by Fluke Quote
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