[NOVEL] Avatar of Afearyn (Cross-posting)

[Katzaniel]

I'm gonna cross-post this, 'cause I'm not sure how many people still check out the Writer's Workshop regularly.

 

Basically, I wrote a draft of a novel:

 

It takes place in a high-magic, high-technology setting, and the basic premise is that the hero, Roshiana, and two others are sudden dropped into the middle of the dangerous wilderness. Not only must they get back home, but then they must discover both who put them there and what is causing the dangerous, paralyzing mist that has begun to cover the world.

 

 

I am seeking feedback, if anybody is interested. I am not expecting anything, though, because novels are very, very long.

 

http://patrickdurham.net/themightypen/index.php?/topic/17354-novel-avatar-of-afearyn/