The World Turns

[James Crow]

We fell in love,

as the world turns.

We thought time had stopped,

but the world turns.

Before I knew it,

the world turns,

and I found myself all alone.

As the world turns,

time passed,

and the world turns.

I found myself looking at the stars,

as the world turns.

You came up to me,

and the world turns.

We laughed and caught up,

as the world turns.

And no matter where we end up,

the world turns.

[Brighid of Byrness]

The world turns, and turns, and turns....whether we're on it or not...and keeps turning through individual ups and downs. The Elizabethans called it "The Wheel of Fortune." It's great to see you're still writing; it seems to be pretty quiet around here! My private message feature isn't working (or else I would send you one inquiring about the state of affairs of James, Scheherazade, Zool, and Brighid. I think they're still in a cavern somewhere). Hopefully that will get remedied (relatively) soon :smile:

[Peredhil]

Good use of repetition.

[Appy]

Lovely, wistful and indeed, nice use of repetition