Peredhil Posted July 15, 2010 Report Posted July 15, 2010 The Princess gazed down from her ivory balcony And in the garden there was a tiger to see "Why, that is absolutely the pet for me," (She was quite taken with the feline beauty). And so through the garden she did walk The tiger meekly purred and did not balk The gardeners to a man did gawk, Calling warnings about the tiger they did talk. Growing bolder and bolder with every stride The Princess ignored the warnings at her cried And setting out on the tiger, she did ride, Only to come back quite completely inside...
Peredhil Posted July 16, 2010 Author Report Posted July 16, 2010 Figure one way to stimulate activity is to be active. Not my best, but as my first in several years - not my worst either. Had to go back and read "Should I post?" before I clicked!
The Portrait of Zool Posted July 17, 2010 Report Posted July 17, 2010 Truer words of wisdom seldom said Master P. Methinks I may take a swing at your example...
Snypiuer Posted July 21, 2010 Report Posted July 21, 2010 I like it, has a 'classic' feel to it. Need to write more myself, will do as soon as I get back home!
Mardrax Posted July 29, 2010 Report Posted July 29, 2010 (edited) Lol. Great stuff here P. Does 'pride before the fall' realy mix into the 'Should I post?' philosophy though? Edited July 29, 2010 by Mardrax
Peredhil Posted July 29, 2010 Author Report Posted July 29, 2010 If only that were the case... But it's "a haughty look before a fall, and pride before destruction." But you raise an interesting point. hmmm
MinimondoT Posted August 4, 2010 Report Posted August 4, 2010 Figure one way to stimulate activity is to be active. Not my best, but as my first in several years - not my worst either. Had to go back and read "Should I post?" before I clicked! You make me want to work on my writing and post again!! Miss you *HUGS*
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