Mistakes

[WrenWind]

It takes only a moment,a whisper of time

A word once released can not be retracted

And everything changes

 

 

Time does not heal all. It festers and and inflames

One small mistake becomes something insurmountable

And everything ends

 

No regrets,no worries is not very realistic

If onlys and appologies won't fix anything

And everyone lies

Edited January 9, 2010 by WrenWind

[Regel]

Strangely I seem to able to relate to this piece.

Disclosing the truth can be dangerous and yes, we all lie, if by definition you include lies of omission. The words I have chosen often carry one meaning for me and once read are interpreted in an entirely different way than it was intended. You have a few small mechanical errors in the piece Wrenwind but the feels are strong and the message for me clear.

[WrenWind]

Strangely I seem to able to relate to this piece.

Disclosing the truth can be dangerous and yes, we all lie, if by definition you include lies of omission. The words I have chosen often carry one meaning for me and once read are interpreted in an entirely different way than it was intended. You have a few small mechanical errors in the piece Wrenwind but the feels are strong and the message for me clear.

 

 

I would love you to pooint out the mechanical errors please

 

Thanks for your imput Regel.

[Regel]

Just a small spelling thing Wren and I am sure your P key is sticking. appologies