Ran Yoko Posted October 21, 2008 Report Posted October 21, 2008 wrote this back in August, and the next day, couldn't find it anywhere! found it yesterday, so decided to submit it for scrutinization.(if that's even an actual word:)) I was just writing down random thoughts about the subject of 'tomorrow' and it turned into a poem. might be a little strange, but I like the way it turned out. "TOMORROW" Tomorrow, tomorrow and yet another spring before us, blinding us with the illusion of another day. But in finding our tomorrow, we merely find another today. Blue sky with sun, gray sky with clouds followed by nights of moon and stars. This mad, crazy cycle is never-ending. Yet we count on it to plan and to live. So live your today to the best you can, for there are those who have no tomorrow.
Peredhil Posted May 6, 2009 Report Posted May 6, 2009 I do like this, yup. For a poetic doodle, it has a bit of depth and philosophy, while being easy to read. Somehow in my mind ties in well with the road one that Tanuchan recently wrote.
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