Patrick Posted August 4, 2008 Report Posted August 4, 2008 Flames DanceLife-giving lightFlames dance merrily in the nightBurning lives awayChasing the night awayPicture taken during 4th of July BBQ in Queens, NYC
Wyvern Posted August 14, 2008 Report Posted August 14, 2008 As I noted to you before, this is a neat little poem Patrick. :-) It's cool to see some poetry inspired by the recent European pennite US trips, and the photo of the New York BBQ fire that you took compliments the poem nicely. I like the happy and almost romantic tone of this poem, which is prominent to me despite the "Burning lives away" line ringing a slightly different note. Anyway, thanks for sharing this here... now where are those US-tour Pen gathering pics at, dang it?! *nags Patrick to get more permissions from people* ^_-
Patrick Posted August 14, 2008 Author Report Posted August 14, 2008 Before I get permissions I need to actually select, which pics I want to post. Thanks for the comment on the poem.
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