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Imperfect names for perfect ideas,

fleeting impractical gone never

here

in a flash things are switched

around

towns that aren't real just

illusions

of grandeur just vapors of

steam

trains on tracks of deception

But names are imperfect, and words just the same.

  • 2 weeks later...
Posted

*huggles* I love this, and you rock!

 

The way the sentences overflow in one another through the single words in between, the things you say (I adore the imagine of city's being illusions of grandeur), very well done. You still know what you're doing ^_^

 

*huggles again, just because she can*

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*returns the Appy huggles*

 

^.^

 

Thanks for all the sparkly nice words! I am glad you liked it!

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